Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Thanksgiving by Dom Herrera

Although, I enjoy every holiday, Thanksgiving is the bomb. Initially, Thanksgiving has delicious food. The turkey from Thanksgiving is so delicious and tasty. Pumpkin pie is the tastiest food in the world. Additionally, my family is the best family to me because they are a fun family. Seeing my cousins is very fun because they are funny and crazy. Lastly, I like to relax like I am in an awesome spa. I like to watch the Broncos play against Detroit Lions and see who wins. Napping with my friends and playing my Nintendo DS is very relaxing. Without question Thanksgiving is the greatest holiday.

I would make these three changes to the cafeteria. To get the ball rolling, I would have the walls look as exciting as a lion. The cool thing is that I would put posters on the walls of famous people (like Albert Einstein) to inspire us. since the sky is so eye-popping, I would paint the walls baby blue (with cloud designs). Furthermore, I would make more time to eat. We would be able to do what we want. We would have time to eat and then chat; it would be a wonderful time to relax and eat at the same time. Lastly, we would be able to change the food. The cafeteria would have more magnificent choices to choose from like nachos and mixed greens. Also, if they give us more healthy food you would look splendid .As you can see, I would make 3 changes to the cafeteria.

Changes to the Cafeteria by Breanne Gerlock


My 3 changes to the lunchroom would be nice to have. Initially, I would like to change where we sit. We would get to sit where ever we want, and we don’t have to sit with our classmates. The 5th graders would be able to sit with 5th graders and 4th graders would sit with other 4th graders. Likewise, I would want to change the drinks we have. We should have chocolate milk every day. Also, we should get Pepsi every other day. Last but not least, I want to change the food. We should get to pick out what ever we want to eat. They should get us some potato chips (like barbeque chips). Clearly, my 3 changes to the lunchroom would be nice to have because we would get to sit wherever we want, pick what we want to drink and would get to pick the food we want.

What Makes a Good Friend by Jillian Edwards


Every good friend has three important traits. To begin, she would be caring. My friend would give me a lot of gifts for no reason. She will always help me with my homework when I need help. Next, she is so funny it blows my mind. She makes me laugh so hard I fall down. My friend would tell a lot of jokes, like cartoon jokes. Finally, she tells the truth all the time. My friend would tell the truth to her teachers and friends. Clearly, every good friend has these three traits.

My Friend by Maddy Lopez

I can describe my friend Raynna in many different ways. To begin, she has pretty hair. Her hair is as brown as an oak tree’s trunk .Furthermore, she can eat a mammoth hamburger. She can eat a hamburger with every thing on it (such as extra pickles). Last but not least, she is a good friend. Raynna will be there no matter what. If you were falling out of a tree she would be there to help. As you can see, Raynna has pretty hair, she is a big eater, and she is a good friend.

Tuesday, December 13, 2011

My Perfect Brother by Arianna Lopez

My perfect brother would be loving, helpful, and cool. To begin, a loving brother would be our heart on Thanksgiving. Moreover, brothers that are helpful are like a first aid kit or a helping with homework aid kit. Last of all, cool brothers can do crazy magic tricks like illusions and card tricks. Thus, my perfect brother would be loving, helpful and cool.

The Terrible Turkey Day by Jasmine Lopez


I’ll never forget the time I was a turkey. It all started when I went to bed,

(I was human then).When I woke up I was going to wiggle my toes, and I saw three webbed toes with bumpy skin.

Soon after I was outside and something hurt like a needle, and out popped a feather, and more followed after. Then a beak came instead of a mouth. Sadly I ended up in the barn (Guess what came to my knowledge, it was Thanksgiving).

Forty minuets later a tall, crazy man started to chase me. I ran as fast as a speeding bullet (Eventually I wore him out). Seven minuets later he came out with a knife and caught me! Just as he was going to cut off my head I tuned back!

What I learned from this experience is that it’s hard to be any animal on any holiday.

How to Make a PBJ Sandwich by James Anderson


I like making different things, but peanut butter and jelly is my favorite thing to make. To get the ball rolling, you get the scrumptious ingredients. First you get the peanut butter and jelly, and the bread. Furthermore the first thing you do is put the pieces of bread down, and then you put peanut butter on one piece and jelly on the other. Lastly, I’d be able to eat my sandwich. You can eat the sandwich wherever I want. To wrap up, I like making different things, but my favorite thing to make is peanut butter and jelly sandwiches because you get the scrumptious ingredients, start making it, and you get to eat. You can make a great peanut butter and jelly sandwich.

Deadmau5 by PJ Hurtado-Berg



Dead Mau5 is my favorite type of music. To begin, Dead Mau5 has cool costumes. He has a head that has eyes that glow in the dark to every beat he makes. Next, he has an awesome stunt double that dies (he pretends to die) on the stage. Finally, he has an awesome Dead Mau5 mechanical head (the head is virtual). The head goes to the beat of Ghosts n’ Stuff (I think it was one of his most popular hits). Clearly, Dead Mau5 is my favorite type of music because he has cool costumes, he has a stunt double, and he has a mechanical head.

Halloween by Alyssa Martin

Halloween is a wonderful holiday. To begin, you can get costumes. It’s awesome getting to be any thing! Plus, I love all the makeup you can wear. Additionally, candy is amazing! You can get enough to fill the entire Empire State Building. There’s all different kinds and flavors (yum). Finally, decorating for Halloween is awesome (even better than candy). You can make spiders and fake cob webs. Skeletons give some people giggly bones. Clearly, Halloween is a spectacular holiday because you can wear a costume, get candy, and decorate.

My Favorite Holiday by Robert McCall

Although I enjoy many holidays, Thanksgiving is the absolute best. To start, there are many delicious foods. Turkey is the fat and juicy thing. Have you tried pumpkin pie? Oh you don’t know what you are missing out on. Also, my family has many relatives. I have lots of cousins (I think I have over 25 cousins). My first one is Katlen. We play Gator together all day, it is fun game we play. Lastly, everybody would sit down and watch pro football. We saw the Dallas Cowboys vs. Washington Redskins. The Redskins won the game. That night we all dreamt and snored except me. Without question, Thanksgiving is the best because I can eat great food, see my family, and relax.

My Special Item by Jasmine Lopez


My favorite item is a big, red, valentine gorilla. Initially, it is special, it was given to me by a friend, oh no my best friend. Her name was Jazmin Medina. Furthermore, my gorilla is pillow like and it helps me sleep. It has a million little fluffy strands all over its body, even on his wrists. Also, when it’s cold, it keeps me warm during the night. Clearly, my favorite item is my gorilla because its pillow like, special, and fluffy.

Tuesday, December 6, 2011

My Favorite Animal by Augie Valles


My favorite animal is a lion .To begin, Lions are the strongest. They are stronger then all boring animals. Lions are strong like a piece of metal. Next, they are kings. Lions are king of the Savannah. The lions get to control the animals, such as lizards and gazelles. Last, they are cool looking. Their fur on their body is awesome. Their tail has a cool patch of hair on it. Clearly, my favorite animal is a lion.

My Special Day by Destiny Murphy


I will always remember the most special day in my life. It all started in my living room with my friends at 4:00. There was a Piñata hanging with Tinker Bell on it and purple strings hanging off of it. All of us were having a great time by chasing a boy named Morgan.

Shortly after, I opened my presents. One of the presents was a pair of cowgirl boots. After I opened my presents, we ate my marble cake. Then, we went in to my room. My friends and I went to watch All Dogs Go To Heaven.

Just before they went home we hit the piñata. We got lots of candy like gum and Tootise Rolls. My friends went home after that.

As I think about it now, I learned that when you have a birthday, try to have as much fun as you can. It is important to have a good time so that everyone has fun. I always try to invite people who will be nice and have fun.

My Favorite Friend by Angel Garcia

If I had to pick my favorite friend it would be Bryan. To begin, he plays soccer with me all the time. He likes being goalie but he can’t block slow balls. When he plays like a player and I’m goalie he kicks as hard as a rock. Further more, we play a lot of video games. We both play the game called Black Ops Call of Duty. He only plays God of War. Finally, he’s always there for me. He waits for me at school. Sometimes he waits for me at home. As you can see, Bryan is a good friend because he plays soccer with me, plays video games with me, and he’s always there for me.

My Favorite Relative by Augie Valles

I have many relatives, but my cousin Josiah is the best in my family. To begin, we love football. We both play tackle foot ball every year. Next, we are really fast, like a road runner. When we both race it is always a tie. Last, games are really fun. We love Madden very much because we play football. Clearly, I have many relatives, but my cousin Josiah is the best in my family.

Thanksgiving by Destiny Torres

Although I enjoy every holiday, Thanksgiving is the absolute best. To begin, food is the best and yummy. Turkey is the best on thanksgiving when your family gives you fantastic brown gravy with it. Pumpkin pie is the best with whipped cream white as snow. Additionally, spending time with family is spectacular. I would see my cousins Jordon and Jaden when they invite me on Thanksgiving to have dinner. Together at their house we play lots of video games in their bedroom like race cars, and Mortal Combat. Lastly, I love to go into my purple room and relax all day. Watching football is the best when nobody bothers you. Taking a nap is the best when I watch TV on the couch. Without question, Thanksgiving rocks because I eat great food, see my family, and relax.

Tuesday, November 29, 2011

My Favorite Item by Jesus Lamberty


My favorite item is my dad’s 21-foot Baitliner for many reasons. To start, we can go tubing and fishing. You can catch enormous catfish and humongous pike. Next, when I go fast on the tube, my dad cheers me on. It feels like you are on rocks when you go fast. Lastly, you can dive off the end of my dad’s boat. We can do flips off of it as high as a helicopter in the sky. In conclusion, my favorite item is my dad’s 21-foot Baitliner because you can go tubing and fishing, my dad cheers me on, and you can dive off of it.

My Favorite Car by Orlando Franceschi

My favorite type of car is a ’69 Dodge Charger for 3 reasons. First and foremost, the seats would be awesome. My seats would be smooth leather. Furthermore, my ’69 Dodge Charger will go extremely fast. It will go 186 miles per hour. Last but not least, the color of the car is sick. It is orange, it is brighter than the sun. Without question, my favorite car is a ’69 Dodge Charger.

Computer Club by Arianna Lopez


Although I like many clubs, I would create a computer club. To begin, for our computer club we should be able to go on the internet. In our computer club we can do research on frogs (like slimy toads). Moreover, publishing can help you become a better typer. Also, typing SCRs can be hard because SCRs are tests. Fun stuff like posting on your blog is kind of an activity .Lastly, Successmaker can help you learn different things. Having math skills can help you be a better math student. Getting smart will let you get better grades like Albert Einstein. Thus, a computer club would be excellent.

My Favorite Place to Eat by Vanessa Trujillo

My favorite place to eat is Carlos Miguel’s for 3 good reasons. To start, Carlos Miguel’s has Mexican food. I like Carlos Miguel’s because it’s delicious. Next, I like to eat at Carlos Miguel’s because I can learn a different culture. I can experience a different type of food. Last but not least, it’s the best restaurant because you can bring your whole family there. We could celebrate a birthday, or just eat there. Now you can see, my favorite place to eat is at is Carlos Miguel’s because it has Mexican food, I can learn a different culture, and you can bring your whole family there!

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Why I Should Work in a Candy Shop by Alyssa Martin

Dear Mr.Candy,

I’m perfect to work at a candy shop.To begin, I’m a computer when I work. I am really good at math, people would have their totals quicker than you can say supercalifragilisticexpialidocious.Also, I’m a really good at reading, I can speak different languages.Additionally, my behavior is as good as Anna-Lisa’s.I never yell at little kids, or adults as a matter of fact.Plus, I am very very soft hearted.Finally, I have a wonderful personality. I’m super duper funny.Of course I’m creative (from my mom of course), too! Clearly, I would be perfect to work at a candy shop because I am smart, have good behavior, and have a wonderful personality.

Love,

Alyssa.M.

My Favorite Place to Eat by Savannah Stein

My favorite place to eat is Texas Road House. To begin, they have peanuts when you sit down. They also give you peanuts when you leave. Moreover, they have some amazing bread on the table. While you are waiting you can munch on them for a little while. Finally, there steak is baller. They water in my mouth by the time I am done chewing; I am not thirsty anymore. They are enormous like the Twin Towers, too. Thus, Texas Road House is my favorite place to eat because the peanuts, the amazing bread and the mouth watering steak

Nasty Burgers by Gloria Medrano

Even though I have a lot of least favorite meals, my least favorite meal is my Mom’s home made hamburgers. To begin, my mom puts too much of her garlic. Her garlic is spicy as a jalapeno. Her home made hamburgers are hot. Equally important, they taste nasty like garbage. The reason why they taste so nasty is because my mom puts too much onion. Last but not least, my mom makes them to greasy like lotion. She puts too much oil in her home made hamburgers. That’s what makes her hamburgers to greasy. Clearly, this is why I don’t like my Mom’s home made hamburgers.

Eminem by Rob McCall

Even though there are many rappers Eminem is my favorite. To begin, Eminem is my favorite rapper in the world. My favorite song is When I’m Gone. Next, I really love to listen to the awesome beats really loud. Have you tried it on Rock Band? You can listen to crazy streams. To sum up, listening to Eminem is best in the whole world because my favorite song by him is When I’m Gone, he has awesome beats, and I play it on Rock Band 2.

Friday, November 11, 2011

In Honor of Chris Tarte and Veterans Everywhere

The 4th and 5th graders of Oak Creek Elementary honor the servicemen and women of the United States who put their lives on the line every day to fight for the freedom and security of our country.
We would also like to honor Chris Tarte, a true American hero who valiantly risked his life in Afghanistan in order to protect the rights and freedoms of Americans everywhere. Chris recently suffered serious injuries in service of his country, and the boys and girls of Oak Creek want to commend him for his honorable service and wish him the best birthday and Veterans Day we can. We appreciate your bravery and service and it is because of people like you that we are able to have the opportunities and freedoms only found in this great nation.

"Your a hero to this country and I thank you." - Kira
"Happy birthday and happy Veterans Day. I hope your leg feels better." - Trinity
"Thank you for your service and happy birthday." - Jose
"Happy birthday. Thank you for serving our country and happy Veterans Day. You guys are superheroes for serving our country." - Ciso
"Thank you for helping our country and happy Veterans Day and birthday." - P.J.
"Thank you for serving our country and for what you do." -Arianna
"Happy birthday, thank you for fighting for our country. You are the best." - Martin
"Happy birthday. I hope you feel better. You are brave." - Mike
"Happy birthday!" - Robert C
"You are my hero." - Terrance
"Get well soon. Thank you for serving our country." - Jonique
"Get well soon. Thank you for fighting for the US." - Zitlalic
"Get well soon Chris. You are a true hero." - Skyler
"You are a true hero. Thank you Chris." - Melina
"Happy Veterans Day. I hope you get better." - Ashley
"Thank you Chris for your bravery. Happy birthday." - Dom
"Thank you for your bravery." - Tehya
"Thank you for your service." - Dora
"Thank you for serving our country." - Diamond
"Thank you for serving our country and happy birthday and Veterans Day." - James
"Thank you for fighting for the freedom for the US." - Julio
"Hope you get well soon. Happy birthday! Thank you for serving in the Army and keeping us safe." - Abigail
"Hope you get better soon. Thank you for fighting for our country." - Kriel
"You are very brave for taking care of America. Thank you for fighting for us." - Aaliyah
"I hope you are feeling better. Thank you for service." - Robert
"Thank you for serving our country and happy birthday. I hope you feel better." - Christian
"Thank you for serving our country and being brave. Happy birthday." - Savannah
"Thank you for serving our country. I hope you feel better and happy birthday." - Jessica
"Get better soon!" - Charles
"Thank you for sacrificing your life for our country. Also, thank you for not letting us down. Happy birthday!" - Jesus
"Thank you for keeping our country safe!" - Orlando
"Hope you get well soon. Thank you for protecting us." - Shawna
"I hope you get well soon and thank you for helping the US!" - Daisy
"I am so sorry for what happened to you and thank you for what you did." -Roman
"Thank you for serving our beautiful country. You are a hero to me, you are like Superman." - Augie
"Happy birthday. Thank you for being a hero and healing the world." - John
"Thank you for being brave for our country and protecting the world. We give you huge thanks." - Jill
"Thank you for being brave and for being a great hero for our country." - Quincy
"Happy birthday and happy Veterans Day." - Raina
"Happy birthday and thanks for serving. Get well soon!" - Jasmine C.
"Happy birthday. Thanks for all you have done for the US." - Brandon
"Thank you for serving our country. Happy birthday." - Gabe R.
"Thanks for being a real hero. Hope you get well soon." - Raynna
"Thank you for everything that you do." - Jaelene
"Thank you for taking a risk like this for our country." - Maddy
"I hope you feel better and have a happy Veterans Day." - Adrianna
"Thank you for risking your life for us." - Gloria
"Thank you for fighting for our country and I hope you feel better." - Ryan
"Thank you for what you do and I wish you a happy birthday." - Jacob
"Have a good birthday and Veterans Day." - Justin
"Happy birthday and get well. Thanks for serving our country." - Amber
"Thank you for taking a risk to fight for our country." - Vanessa
"Happy birthday and happy Veterans Day!" - Venyce
"If it wasn't for you we wouldn't be safe and live like we do now." - Gabriel L.
"Thank you so much for protecting America." - Lazarick
"I hope that you get well soon." - Juliet
"Thanks for serving our country." - Isabel
"Have a great birthday." - Chris
"Thank you for taking care of our country." - Giselle
"Thank you and best wishes." - Jasmine
"Happy birthday! I hope you get well." - Saraeyah
"Without your help the world would not be as safe." - Alisa H.
"Thank you for serving our country and I wish you a happy birthday and Veterans Day." - Breanne
"Thank you for fighting for our country. You are a hero." - Anna-Lisa
"Thank you so much for your bravery. I hope you get better soon!" - Thao Vy
"Get well soon and a happy Veterans Day." - Weldon
"You did well protecting this nation!" - Kurt
"Have a happy Veterans Day and a happy birthday!" - Ezequiel
"I hope you get better soon. Thanks for everything." - Destiny
"Thank you for your service, I hope you get well soon." - Alyssa
"I hope you get better, thank you for serving our country." - Savannah
"Thank you for your bravery." - Melissa
"Thank you for keeping us safe and being brave." - Isaiah
"Thank you for protecting the world for us and for being brave." - Angel
"Have the best birthday ever!" - Maxxwel
"Happy birthday to you. I really hope you feel better." - Jaqueline

Again, all of us in the Oak Creek community want to extend our greatest thanks to the brave men and women who tirelessly defend our country. Happy Veterans Day!

Tuesday, November 8, 2011

If I Could Meet Anyone... by Vanessa Trujillo

The famous people I want to meet are the Iconic Boyz for many reasons. To begin, the Iconic Boyz are from ABDC or known as Americas Best Dance Crew. They are the best, but they didn’t win the competition. Next, I like the Iconic Boyz because they are from New Jersey. I really want to meet them. Last but not least, I’ve been saving my money to go to New Jersey to see them, I have $83.10. I’m going to bring 5 of my friends and my 1 month older cousin. Now you see, the famous I want to meet is the Iconic Boyz.

Favorite Season by Arianna Lopez

I like fall for so many reasons. To begin, I like fall because the leaves are changing. The colors are orange, green, yellow, and brown. Additionally, in October it’s my mom’s birthday on the 31. My grandma makes a yummy cake for my mom’s birthday. Last but not least, the thing I like most about fall is…. HALLOWEEN. I like to dress up as a witch. Also I get lots of candy! As you can tell, I really like fall.

Class Pet by Destiny Murphy

Although I have many favorite class pets, my top favorite is a bunny. To begin, the bunny is fluffy. He is as smooth as a baby kitten. Next, the bunny will hop around the room. He will bounce as high as a toad. Finally, my bunny will be cute. He will be as cute as a baby frog. Clearly,my class pet will be a bunny for many reasons.

Best Friend by Angel Garcia

If I had to pick my favorite animal it would be a puppy. To begin, my puppy would be playful. Every time we play, we would play with the ball. After we play with the ball, he would roll as fast as a cheetah. Furthermore, he would be so cute. He would be as cute as a rainbow. He would also be as cute as a baby panda. He would also be so cute; I would pet him every time he does something for me. Also, I would walk him around the city. He would walk around the whole park. I would walk him down the street (especially on the sidewalk). He would walk around the whole park. I would walk him in the sidewalk. Then, I would exercise him at the house. We would play fetch. He would be running around the house. He would run as fast as a cheetah. Finally, we would go to the beach and swim. We would splash everywhere on the beach. My puppy and I would dive all the way to the bottom of the beach. As you can see, I would pick a puppy because he would be playful, cute, and I would exercise him.

If I Could Meet Anyone... by Augie Valles

If I can meet one person it would be Demarcus Ware. To begin, he is a NFL football player. He plays for the Cowboys. Next, we play the same position. We play defensive end, they need to be strong. Last, he’s famous. He is one of the hardest hitting players in the NFL. If I can meet anyone, it would be Demarcus Ware.

Best Friend by Destiny Torres

If I could describe my friend, it would be Venyce. To begin, she is nice and sweet. When I get hurt she helps me. Also she doesn’t do stuff behind my back, like tell lies to people. Additionally, we love to play together by playing basketball at Quail Lake Park. We like to eat cucumbers; eating cucumbers is very healthy for you. Lastly, we don’t fight by yelling each other. We don’t even call each other names. Clearly, you can see that I have a true best friend!

Thursday, October 20, 2011

I Want to Meet... by Annalisa Morman

Even though there are many people to meet, I would want China Anne McLain. To begin, I would want to see her in her music videos. She sounds awesome; she makes everything fun to listen to. Her music videos look amazing; it’s awesome to see the different backgrounds. Additionally, I would want to meet her because of her acting. When she acts it looks hard to do. Her acting also seems like its exciting to do. Finally, I would meet Chyna Ann Mclain because of her clothing line. The outfits are as pretty as a rose. Clearly, I would want to meet China Anne McLain because of her music, acting, and clothing.

My Friend Maddy by Amber Tumblin


Maddy is a mind-blowing best friend for many reasons. To begin, we have a lot of sleepovers. We stay up all night and do stuff. We sleep in sometimes because we are tired. Additionally, she plays with me a lot. We play tag in her back yard. She has a Wii, so we play it sometimes. Last but not least, she is very nice to me. She plays with me all the time. She also talks to me all the time too. Clearly, Maddy is a mind-blowing friend because she has sleepovers with me, she plays with me, and because she is nice to me.